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Nick Buchheit's avatar

You painted some fantastic visuals here. Very descriptive and easy to read. Also it was creepy! Nice work!

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I agree with you about religious horror - simply because what they call 'religions' I call evil cults. And there's a massive amount of real-world horror in all that. Every day, unfortunately. 'It's not god, it's a demon pretending to be god' (this is the truth that shall make you free...)

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

I really like the way you subtly bring social issues into your writing - even a short horror story. It makes it disturbing on a whole other level. Great story!

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Ian Patterson's avatar

Thank you, that's a lot of the fuel for my writing!

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